Chapter 7 - Ton in...love!?!?
The chapter starts here.

Keon's comments:

As I was saying last chapter; after I finish a dark chapter I come back with a silly, happy one! In this chapter Ton gets a crush, Tongry's name is finally revealed, and Angry barely shows up in the chapter. Also in this chapter marks the first appearance of Brenna Mynx; Ton's crush. I actually based her personality off of a friend I have; so it was quite easy to write how she would act. This chapter also marks the return of...NUDITY! Drawing Brenna naked finally let me know I improved enough to be able to add things like nipples. Speaking of basing Brenna off a friend, the messenger of yummy Rah is none other then my e-daughter RA. Her yaoi beam was something I could so see her having, she is an avid follower of yaoi and such. So it seemed appropriate to give her such a destructive power! One last thing; I was building up in this chapter Ton being able to take initiative for once. You'll probably see it as the story goes on, but Ton will develop even more as a character, and start doing things for himself. I think this chapter was a start towards that.


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