Chapter 3 - In Ton We Trust!
The chapter starts here.

Keon's comments:

The first page of this chapter is just hilarious to me. The fact Ton thinks of Angry in this situation and that he's insulting him just has me in stitches! In this chapter is the first of many wardrobe and hairstyle changes for Aphrodite; I really loved this hairstyle for her. Also in this chapter marks the beginning of some of the major storylines. With Mauvais appearing, talk of Godzilla Mulligan, green card, and of Angry's past of being a great boxer. I remember I got one of my first real reviews in this chapter and they did note with Mauvais' appearance they were starting to see there is a lot more of a story in ADM; how right they were. Oh I also can't forget about Hepaestus and his black man thong...why the hell did I do that anyways? But now to end on a good note, I did enjoy the last page of the chapter. Aphrodite going from angry to lusting I think I pulled off pretty decently.


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